nice job on the top, but make sure that you explain why the concessions that they have made matter for anything--don't express your confusion or clarify their argument for them, just say either that their arg doesn't make sense and then explain what your argument is--nice job with the asia pivot stuff towards the bottom of the speech, just make sure you aren't repetitive
Parli Debate--August 2nd
Ethan—you are pushing yourself too much with no reason—impact comparisons!!!—permutation is good, describe what the offense for it is—why no theoretical objections to their advoacay
Disad Debate--7/28 (Baxter)
nice job on the top, but make sure that you explain why the concessions that they have made matter for anything--don't express your confusion or clarify their argument for them, just say either that their arg doesn't make sense and then explain what your argument is--nice job with the asia pivot stuff towards the bottom of the speech, just make sure you aren't repetitive
Parli Debate--August 2nd
Ethan—you are pushing yourself too much with no reason—impact comparisons!!!—permutation is good, describe what the offense for it is—why no theoretical objections to their advoacay